Friday, March 16, 2012

In life, people will fall in and out of love very quickly, and one side of the relationship is often left with feelings of longing and regret for what has happened. The band One Direction usually focuses their songs on that theme. They were formed in 2010 on a British talent competition, the X Factor. They each auditioned individually, but due to their talent, appeal, and complimenting voices, the five joined together to form a ban. They didn’t end up winning, but they have been signed to a record label, and are becoming very successful nonetheless with a rapidly growing fan base. In their song, “More Than This,” One Direction utilizes first person point of view, realistic imagery and a desiring mood to portray the heartbreak and sorrow of wanting more than is returned in a relationship.
The first person perspective of the singer helps to tell the story of the song and make it more intimate and relatable. The song was written in the first person point of view. In the lyrics “When I see you on the street, in his arms I get weak,” the singer is saying that he is experiencing this himself. He is telling you a story from his view and what you should think of when you hear it. When you hear this song, you can feel the emotions that the singer is going through from the lyrics. By using the word “you,” instead of the word “she,” it runs on a more personal and relatable level to the listener.
This love song was made to be more romantic by the realistic imagery that takes you into the singer’s emotions. “As I walk up to your door, my head turns to face the floor, ‘cause I can’t look you in the eyes and say,” these lyrics allow you to feel the emotions the singer is going through. They wrote the song so that people could relate to it and understand in personally. That was the reasoning with straight forward, and to the point lyrics, to make it more raw and personal, and so that the listener can create an image in their minds.
The way people feel is usually cause by the emotional actions of those around them. In music, the feelings radiating through the tone and lyrics convey a specific mood. In this song, it is a mood of regret and longing for someone else when you can’t have them. “I’m broken, do you hear me? I’m blinded, ‘cause you are everything I see,” the singer is trying to make you feel his heartbreak. The quote is very personal because it is directly sung with one person in mind. This makes it relatable because listeners can make a connection to others in their own mind. These are the first lyrics of the song, and it sets an unhappy mood from the beginning. When one listens to this song, they get a sense of the singers feelings through the way the singers express the mood in the song.
This song, “More Than This,” uses many poetic devices and specific words so that the listener can understand the meaning more. The song meaning is actually very concise, and the lyrics are saying exactly what they mean. Even though it is very obvious, it is still a great song. That shows how One Direction utilizes first person point of view, realistic imagery and a desiring mood to portray the heartbreak and sorrow of wanting more than is returned in a relationship.


2 comments:

  1. Commendations:
    You used a lot of personable descriptions and quotes of the song by adequately proving your universal idea in your body paragraphs. Your adjectives you used to describe your literary devices could easily be related to the purpose the author(s) of the song intended. Your thesis statement was very fluid; it worked well with the rest of your introduction and analysis.

    Criticisms: At one point in your analysis you switched briefly to the second person, referencing the reader as "you." Try not to write informative pieces in the second person because it detracts from the formality of your writing. Also you should try to have smoother transitions into your quotes. Include the quote as a part of your sentence, not as a sentence of its own that you would need to explain. You want to bend the quotes to fit your writing, not the other way around. Quote intigration should be more natural.

    Distinction: I liked how you had a brief description of the band in the introduction it gave a background of the band that helped varify the rest of your analysis. Good Job overall!

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  2. Your song analysis was very well written. I liked how you added more information and background on the band to help bring them in. I like how you chose a band that not many people have probably heard of. The only thing I would do to make this better would make the length just a bit longer.

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